Would anyone be willing to look at my fic?

[cinaed]

It's my sga_santa story, and I'm almost 2,000 words into it and something just doesn't feel right. *growls and kicks it* Would anyone be willing to look at it and telling me a) it's my imagination or b) it is off and how to fix it?

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[cinaed.livejournal.com]

Ronon/Rodney. *hangs head* This is what I get for saying I'm easy and will do any pairing.

[rosewildeirish.livejournal.com]

Heh. I'd be willing to look at it. Send it to me (rosewildeirish) at gmail, and I'll look it over tonight?

[cinaed.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :)